standing on the knoll
between firs and clouds
it was jarringly quiet
my breath
was the loudest element
in my landscape
at first I tried to quiet myself
slowing my breath
to join the hush
of beautifully cold winter
but then I chose another way
to fit into the day
I opened my heart
and laughed into the sun
I think creatures
sleeping underground
felt a joyful rumble
and the wind laughed with me
Beautiful; very atmospheric and moving, thanks for blogging it, best wishes and blessings, Charles.
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So glad you enjoyed it- thank you for your kind comments, Charles!
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